The Rendezvous, television series pitch/Episode loglines - Revision history

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JasonCarswell: /* Episode 13 - Generating (1922, 1943, 1967) */

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Episode 13 - Generating (1922, 1943, 1967)

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	[[File:Anitque National Television.jpg\|thumb\|right\|200px\|Anitque National television.]]		[[File:Anitque National Television.jpg\|thumb\|right\|200px\|Anitque National television.]]
	[[File:Rendezvous_B&W.jpg\|thumb\|right\|200px\|The Rendezvous Tavern with strategically designed look-out windows.]]		[[File:Rendezvous_B&W.jpg\|thumb\|right\|200px\|The Rendezvous Tavern with strategically designed look-out windows.]]

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 == Copyrights ==
-# [[Jason Carswell]] grew up on [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lake_St._Clair Lake St. Clair] at 11080 [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Riverside_Drive_(Windsor,_Ontario) Riverside Drive], half-way between Sand Point Beach and The Rendezvous Tavern at the border of Windsor and [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tecumseh,_Ontario Tecumseh, Ontario] (across the lake from [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grosse_Pointe Grosse Pointe]).
+# [[Jason Carswell]] grew up on [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lake_St._Clair Lake St. Clair] at 11080 [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Riverside_Drive_(Windsor,_Ontario) Riverside Drive East], half-way between Sand Point Beach and The Rendezvous Tavern at the border of Windsor and [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tecumseh,_Ontario Tecumseh, Ontario] (across the lake from [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grosse_Pointe Grosse Pointe]).
 # Jason Carswell developed this story over decades into this original fictional story based in a lot of anecdotal and factual research.
 # Jason Carswell is obviously sharing this story online on his Projex.Wiki website.

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 * [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Supremes The Supremes]
-* - ''Featuring three group members who were marketed for their individual personalities (a move unprecedented at the time) and Diana Ross's pop-friendly voice, the Supremes broke down racial barriers with rock and roll songs underpinned by R&B stylings.''
+** ''Featuring three group members who were marketed for their individual personalities (a move unprecedented at the time) and Diana Ross's pop-friendly voice, the Supremes broke down racial barriers with rock and roll songs underpinned by R&B stylings.''
-* - ''By 1967, Ballard would not show up for recording dates, or would arrive at shows too inebriated to perform.''
+** ''By 1967, Ballard would not show up for recording dates, or would arrive at shows too inebriated to perform.''
-* - ''On June 29, 1967, the group returned to the Flamingo Hotel in Las Vegas as "Diana Ross & the Supremes". The first two days of the Flamingo engagement went by smoothly. On July 1, when reporting for makeup and wardrobe before their first show of the evening, Ballard discovered an extra set of gowns and costumes that had been brought along for Cindy Birdsong. Angered, Ballard performed the first concert of the night inebriated, leading to an embarrassing on-stage incident in which her stomach was revealed when she purposely thrust it forward during a dance routine. Enraged, Gordy ordered her back to Detroit and permanently dismissed her from the group. Birdsong officially assumed her place during the second July 1 show.''
+** ''On June 29, 1967, the group returned to the Flamingo Hotel in Las Vegas as "Diana Ross & the Supremes". The first two days of the Flamingo engagement went by smoothly. On July 1, when reporting for makeup and wardrobe before their first show of the evening, Ballard discovered an extra set of gowns and costumes that had been brought along for Cindy Birdsong. Angered, Ballard performed the first concert of the night inebriated, leading to an embarrassing on-stage incident in which her stomach was revealed when she purposely thrust it forward during a dance routine. Enraged, Gordy ordered her back to Detroit and permanently dismissed her from the group. Birdsong officially assumed her place during the second July 1 show.''
 ** [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Supremes#Impact The Supremes#Impact]
 ** [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Diana_Ross_%26_the_Supremes:_The_No._1%27s ''Diana Ross & the Supremes: The No. 1's'']
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 **# (1967-01-11) [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Love_Is_Here_and_Now_You%27re_Gone Love Is Here and Now You're Gone] #1
 **# (1967-03-20) [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Happening_(song) The Happening (song)] #1
-**# (1967-07-24) [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Reflections_(The_Supremes_song) Reflections (The Supremes song)] '''#2'''
+**# (1967-07-24) [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Reflections_(The_Supremes_song) Reflections (The Supremes song)] #2
 **# (1968-09-30) [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Love_Child_(song) Love Child (song)] #1
-**# (1968-11-21) [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/I%27m_Gonna_Make_You_Love_Me I'm Gonna Make You Love Me] '''#2'''
+**# (1968-11-21) [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/I%27m_Gonna_Make_You_Love_Me I'm Gonna Make You Love Me] #2
 **# (1969-06-13) [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Someday_We%27ll_Be_Together Someday We'll Be Together] #1
-**# (1970-10-15) [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stoned_Love Stoned Love] '''#7'''
+**# (1970-10-15) [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stoned_Love Stoned Love] #7
 **# (1970-07-16) [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ain%27t_No_Mountain_High_Enough Ain't No Mountain High Enough] #1
 **# (1973-05-03) [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Touch_Me_in_the_Morning_(song) Touch Me in the Morning (song)] #1

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 The boys Peter and Clay come down from the upstairs lookout to announce the looming arrival of police, but skeptics wonder if the boys are just saying that for the reward of fries - and then the wire-light alarms everyone into panic mode.
-  [ " A Toronto financier hired to sell its securities instead stole the money, ran off and ultimately committed suicide in a jail cell after being convicted of murdering a drugstore clerk. The bridge boosters turned to Joseph A. Bower, a New Yorker who specialized in rescuing mismanaged companies. Bower succeeded in raising the necessary $12 million. “The only way things can be done today,” said Henry Ford, who backed the project, “is by private business.” "
+  [ This may casually be discussed...
   " The notion of private ownership for such a crucial piece of infrastructure was alarming to political leaders from the start. The mayor of Detroit, John Smith, sued to stop the project, but Detroit held a plebiscite in 1927, and voters favoured letting private funds build and own the bridge by a margin of 8 to 1. “I bow to the will of the people,” said mayor Smith. “They want a bridge and they must have a bridge.” "
   ~ Macleans.ca: [https://www.macleans.ca/politics/ottawa/land-of-the-freeloaders-the-battle-for-a-new-cross-border-bridge/ Land of the freeloaders: The battle for a new cross-border bridge], 2015-05-21 ]
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 None of our business.  Stay out of that country's problems.  Let them sort it out.
 It's the Negros' fault.  It's the Whites' fault.  It's the establishment weaponizing culture in the classic Hegelian dialectic - problem, reaction, solution - and their solution is more centralized control and exploitation!
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 "Ah.  Dylan.  I've seen you, man.  Well, I mean...  My wife saw you live.  You're always welcome in the righteous resistance."</br>
 "Sure man, but I'm just passing through.  A low key stop on my way back home to two babies and the wife."
 Someone reads quotes from the papers about the riot.
-  [ " The precipitating event was a police raid of an unlicensed, after-hours bar, known as a ''[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Speakeasy blind pig]'', on the city's Near West Side. It exploded into one of the deadliest and most destructive social insurgences in American history, lasting five days and surpassing the scale of Detroit's [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/1943_Detroit_race_riot 1943 race riot] 24 years earlier. "
+  [ This may casually be discussed...
   " Governor George W. Romney [father of Mitt] ordered the Michigan Army National Guard into Detroit to help end the disturbance. President Lyndon B. Johnson sent in the United States Army's 82nd and 101st Airborne divisions. The riot resulted in 43 deaths, 1,189 injured, over 7,200 arrests, and more than 400 buildings destroyed. "
   ~ [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/1967_Detroit_riot Wikipedia] ]
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 "I think they already are.  Maybe people just needed to vent."</br>
 "So many lives.  So much loss.  So much destruction."</br>
-"But as Rose said, the real riches of family make it all worth while."
+"But as Rose said, the real riches of family make it all worth while.  Plus Rocky got the casting plant job after all.  We're gonna be okay."
 "Hey! Get in here!"  Rocky was finally patching the kitchen wall, only to find behind it stacks of cash and the two heavy bags of diamonds hidden in the kitchen wall...
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	"Hey! Get in here!" Rocky was finally patching the kitchen wall, only to find behind it stacks of cash and the two heavy bags of diamonds hidden in the kitchen wall...		"Hey! Get in here!" Rocky was finally patching the kitchen wall, only to find behind it stacks of cash and the two heavy bags of diamonds hidden in the kitchen wall...

		+	The family celebrates and the camera slowly zooms in on the diamonds.

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 The greatest wealth is appreciating our fleeting gift of life passed on through generations despite endless hardships.
+Rose sews a Cliff addition to the family tree quilt surrounded by her family.
- + cliffhanger
+=== Episode 13c - ''[[Shining]]'' (1967 July) ===
-=== Episode 13c - ''[[Shining]]'' (1967 July) ===
+Ruby sews a Rose addition to the family tree quilt surrounded by her family.
-  - Diamonds!
+"Hey! Get in here!"  Rocky was finally patching the kitchen wall, only to find behind it stacks of cash and the two heavy bags of diamonds hidden in the kitchen wall...
- + cliffhanger
+== End ==

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 The Rendezvous is hosting the wake for Cliff Sands where people express their sentiments, stories, and regrets about the trip to Belle Isle, follow up details about the riot they missed, the trauma of those riots, the outcomes, and overall despondence at the chaos raging in the wider World War II.
 "Is there any hope left for this world?"
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 Sins are forgiven.
 === Episode 13b - ''[[Enriching]]'' (1943 June) ===
- - awaken
+Awakening, Rose Sands, now a widow, finds some of her grandchildren bringing her breakfast in bed.
- - real riches
+  -
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 === 1800s plus ===
 * [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/History_of_the_telephone History of the telephone]
 * [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kewpie Kewpie dolls]