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== Work in progress ==
 
== Work in progress ==
  
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Rather than directly adapt [[The Rendezvous screenplay|''The Rendezvous'' screenplay]], an unpublished feature screenplay by [[Jason Carswell]], after many years of not looking at my script or copious notes I'm going to first outline (and maybe draft a treatment of) the story, in part from memory and in part to fit this format, to see what new gems may turn up before polishing.
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Rather than directly adapt [[The Rendezvous screenplay|''The Rendezvous'' screenplay]], an unpublished feature screenplay by [[Jason Carswell]], after many years of not looking at my script or copious notes I'm going to first outline (and maybe draft a treatment of) the story, in part from memory and new in part to fit this series format and limit the settings (and to prep for a stage play version), to see what new gems may turn up before polishing.
  
 
At present, 12 or 13 episodes of about 10 minutes each (plus credits), would add up to 120 to 130 minutes - like a movie, but not.
 
At present, 12 or 13 episodes of about 10 minutes each (plus credits), would add up to 120 to 130 minutes - like a movie, but not.
  
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=== Historical accuracy ===
  
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== Episode 1 - ''[[He's sinking!]]'' (1922) ==
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Great care was taken to have as few anachronisms as possible in developing [[The Rendezvous screenplay|''The Rendezvous'' screenplay]].  In developing this television series we should try too, but may find more liberty in the oldest third taking place between 1922 and 1929, undefined by not mentioning dates or current events.
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The road now known as Riverside Drive East would have been a [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Primitive_road primitive road] until it evolved from [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dirt_road dirt] to [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gravel_road gravel] then its current [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tarmacadam Tarmacadam] surface, as would the [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Road_surface_marking#Country_specific_information road surface markings].  Further local timeline research is required to apply to this story's three eras.  Similarly, the interior and exterior of The Rendezvous Tavern evolved over time, as did the owners.
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== Copyrights ==
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# [[Jason Carswell]] grew up on [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lake_St._Clair Lake St. Clair] at 11080 [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Riverside_Drive_(Windsor,_Ontario) Riverside Drive], half-way between Sand Point Beach and The Rendezvous Tavern at the border of Windsor and [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tecumseh,_Ontario Tecumseh, Ontario] (across the lake from [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grosse_Pointe Grosse Pointe]).
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# Jason Carswell developed this story over decades into this original fictional story based in a lot of anecdotal and factual research.
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# Jason Carswell is obviously sharing this story online on his Projex.Wiki website.
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# Jason Carswell does not have an army of lawyers to protect this intellectual property.
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# Jason Carswell requests that anyone who "borrows" elements or further develops his content would contact and include him in their projects, lucrative or not.
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== Episode 1 - ''[[Sinking!]]'' (1922) ==
  
 
From the blustery winter outdoors, boys burst into The Rendezvous roadhouse tavern with alarming news.
 
From the blustery winter outdoors, boys burst into The Rendezvous roadhouse tavern with alarming news.
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Despite several attempts with different ideas, the subtle and not-so-subtle racist men in various states of sobriety finally free the vehicle to continue its smugglers' journey - thanks to the clever logical ideas of Cliff, the Black employee of The Rendezvous.
 
Despite several attempts with different ideas, the subtle and not-so-subtle racist men in various states of sobriety finally free the vehicle to continue its smugglers' journey - thanks to the clever logical ideas of Cliff, the Black employee of The Rendezvous.
  
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== Episode 2 - ''[[Packing for war]]'' (1943) ==
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== Episode 2 - ''[[Packing]]'' (1943) ==
  
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* - Packing for war
  
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== Episode 3 - ''[[Auto grind]]'' (1967) ==
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== Episode 3 - ''[[Grind]]'' (1967) ==
  
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* - Auto grind
  
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== Episode 4 - ''[[Shut up!]]'' (1922, 1943, 1967) ==
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== Episode 4 - ''[[Domestic]]'' (1922, 1943, 1967) ==
  
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=== ''Wall hole'' (1922) ===
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=== ''[[Strife]]'' (1922) ===
  
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At home Cliff's wife, Rose, incessantly challenges his manhood for failing to better stand up to the racists and get a pay raise.
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At home, Cliff's wife, Rose, incessantly challenges his manhood for failing to better stand up to the racists and get a pay raise.
  
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"Why did I even tell you..."  Tensions rise.
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"Why did I even tell you?..."  Tensions rise.
  
 
She clips him with a cast iron pan and his response begins by smashing her head that creates a large hole in the kitchen wall as their children witness in horror.
 
She clips him with a cast iron pan and his response begins by smashing her head that creates a large hole in the kitchen wall as their children witness in horror.
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Ruby, the girl and Clay, the boy...
 
Ruby, the girl and Clay, the boy...
  
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=== ''Dish smash'' (1943) ===
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=== ''[[Dishes]]'' (1943) ===
  
 
Clay, the man...
 
Clay, the man...
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Clay, the man...
 
Clay, the man...
  
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=== ''I won't'' (1967) ===
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=== ''[[Won't]]'' (1967) ===
  
 
Clay, the old man...
 
Clay, the old man...
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== Episode 5 - ''[[Ain't misbehavin']]'' (1922) ==
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== Episode 5 - ''[[Wire]]'' (1922) ==
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Touring musician Fats Waller is tickling the ivories at The Rendezvous as patrons drink.
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Some fellas are setting up an important meeting that will soon take place at The Rendezvous.
  
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Touring musician Fats Waller is tickling the ivories at the Rendezvous as patrons drink - until the boys come down from the upstairs lookout to announce the arrival of police.
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"So I says to him, I says, 'Handy to be so near the river's current that'll sweep away your trash.'  You see?"
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- until the boys come down from the upstairs lookout to announce the arrival of police.
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* - Alarm Wire light
  
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Everyone pitches in to clean up after the entire bar rotates to hide in the wall.
 
  
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Fats starts adlibbing what would become one of his famous tunes, as the police enter asking questions but are only rewarded with fries, like the boys, plus a subtle bribe.
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== Episode 6 - ''[[Tensions]]'' (1943) ==
  
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== Episode 6 - ''[[Having a riot]]'' (1943) ==
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* - Having a riot
  
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== Episode 7 - ''[[Discontent]]'' (1967) ==
  
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== Episode 7 - ''[[Seeds of discontent]]'' (1967) ==
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* - Seeds of discontent
  
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== Episode 8 - ''[[Roadhouses]]'' (1922, 1943, 1967) ==
  
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== Episode 8 - ''[[Roadhouse taverns]]'' (1922, 1943, 1967) ==
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=== ''[[Ain't misbehavin']]'' (1922) ===
  
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=== ''Wire light'' (1922) ===
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Everyone pitches in to clean up after the entire bar rotates to hide in the wall.
  
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Fats starts adlibbing what would become one of his famous tunes, as the police enter asking questions but are only rewarded with fries, like the boys, plus a subtle bribe.
  
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=== ''Patriarch ache'' (1943) ===
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=== ''[[Patriarch ache]]'' (1943) ===
  
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=== ''Supremes'' (1967) ===
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=== ''[[Supremes]]'' (1967) ===
  
 
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== Episode 13 - ''[[Wealth of generations]]'' (1922, 1943, 1967) ==
 
== Episode 13 - ''[[Wealth of generations]]'' (1922, 1943, 1967) ==
  
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=== ''Walk and patch'' (1922) ===
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=== ''[[Quietly healing]]'' (1922) ===
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Through the blizzard Cliff trudges home alone, in the dark.
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Cliff finishes patching up the wall, he quietly tidies the kitchen, and puts his tools away.
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Cliff slips into bed, Rose rolls over, and they embrace in silence.
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Sins are forgiven.
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=== ''[[Real riches]]'' (1943) ===
  
 
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=== ''Real riches'' (1943) ===
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=== ''[[Diamonds!]]'' (1967) ===
  
 
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=== ''Diamonds!'' (1967) ===
 
  
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*: "Ain't Misbehavin'" is a 1929 stride jazz/early swing song. Andy Razaf wrote the lyrics to a score by Thomas "Fats" Waller and Harry Brooks for the Broadway musical comedy play ''Connie's Hot Chocolates'' (opened June 20, 1929). '''As a work from 1929 with its copyright renewed, it will enter the American public domain on January 1, 2025.'''
 
*: "Ain't Misbehavin'" is a 1929 stride jazz/early swing song. Andy Razaf wrote the lyrics to a score by Thomas "Fats" Waller and Harry Brooks for the Broadway musical comedy play ''Connie's Hot Chocolates'' (opened June 20, 1929). '''As a work from 1929 with its copyright renewed, it will enter the American public domain on January 1, 2025.'''
 
* [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Boardwalk_Empire ''Boardwalk Empire''], an HBO television series, 2010-2014
 
* [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Boardwalk_Empire ''Boardwalk Empire''], an HBO television series, 2010-2014
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* [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Diamond#Gem-grade_diamonds Diamond#Gem-grade diamonds], are a controlled centralized trade artificially inflating the value of a semi-precious gem through [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Diamond#Marketing marketing]
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** [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/De_Beers#Marketing De_Beers#Marketing], 'A Diamond is Forever', 1947
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*** [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Diamonds_Are_a_Girl%27s_Best_Friend Diamonds Are a Girl's Best Friend], song in ''Gentlemen Prefer Blondes'' the [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gentlemen_Prefer_Blondes_(musical) 1949 musical] and [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gentlemen_Prefer_Blondes_(1953_film) 1953 movie]
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*** [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Diamonds_Are_Forever_(novel) ''Diamonds Are Forever (1956 novel)'']
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*** [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Diamonds_Are_Forever_(film) ''Diamonds Are Forever (1971 film)'']
  
 
* [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jewish-American_organized_crime Jewish-American organized crime]
 
* [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jewish-American_organized_crime Jewish-American organized crime]
 
** [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Joseph_Zerilli Joseph Zerilli]
 
** [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Joseph_Zerilli Joseph Zerilli]
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*** [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Detroit_Partnership Detroit Partnership]
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** [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Meyer_Lansky Meyer Lansky], oddly doesn't mention anything about his government and CIA connections
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** [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Murder,_Inc. Murder, Inc.]
 
** [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Racketeering Racketeering]
 
** [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Racketeering Racketeering]
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** [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Purple_Gang The Purple Gang]
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** [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Purple_Gang The Purple Gang], aka Sugar House Gang
  
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* [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prohibition Prohibition]
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* [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prohibition#North_America Prohibition#North America]
 
** [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prohibition_in_Canada Prohibition in Canada]
 
** [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prohibition_in_Canada Prohibition in Canada]
 
** [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prohibition_in_the_United_States Prohibition in the United States]
 
** [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prohibition_in_the_United_States Prohibition in the United States]

Revision as of 18:25, 21 July 2024

Anitque National television.
The Rendezvous Tavern with strategically designed look-out windows.
The Rendezvous Bar was wired into four other roadhouses with warning buzzers to alert them of impending police raids.
The Edgewater Thomas Inn was a high-class blind-pig in Riverside with secret passageways and hidden wine cellars.
Bertha Thomas was the eccentric roadhouse pioneer who ran the Edgewater Thomas Inn.

A logline (aka elevator pitch) is a one or two line plot summary.

Work in progress

Rather than directly adapt The Rendezvous screenplay, an unpublished feature screenplay by Jason Carswell, after many years of not looking at my script or copious notes I'm going to first outline (and maybe draft a treatment of) the story, in part from memory and new in part to fit this series format and limit the settings (and to prep for a stage play version), to see what new gems may turn up before polishing.

At present, 12 or 13 episodes of about 10 minutes each (plus credits), would add up to 120 to 130 minutes - like a movie, but not.

Historical accuracy

Great care was taken to have as few anachronisms as possible in developing The Rendezvous screenplay. In developing this television series we should try too, but may find more liberty in the oldest third taking place between 1922 and 1929, undefined by not mentioning dates or current events.

The road now known as Riverside Drive East would have been a primitive road until it evolved from dirt to gravel then its current Tarmacadam surface, as would the road surface markings. Further local timeline research is required to apply to this story's three eras. Similarly, the interior and exterior of The Rendezvous Tavern evolved over time, as did the owners.

Copyrights

  1. Jason Carswell grew up on Lake St. Clair at 11080 Riverside Drive, half-way between Sand Point Beach and The Rendezvous Tavern at the border of Windsor and Tecumseh, Ontario (across the lake from Grosse Pointe).
  2. Jason Carswell developed this story over decades into this original fictional story based in a lot of anecdotal and factual research.
  3. Jason Carswell is obviously sharing this story online on his Projex.Wiki website.
  4. Jason Carswell does not have an army of lawyers to protect this intellectual property.
  5. Jason Carswell requests that anyone who "borrows" elements or further develops his content would contact and include him in their projects, lucrative or not.



Episode 1 - Sinking! (1922)

From the blustery winter outdoors, boys burst into The Rendezvous roadhouse tavern with alarming news.

Venturing out onto the frozen Lake St. Clair, the men and boys find a stuck old jalopy weighed down with whisky perilously in danger of plunging into the frozen depths.

Despite several attempts with different ideas, the subtle and not-so-subtle racist men in various states of sobriety finally free the vehicle to continue its smugglers' journey - thanks to the clever logical ideas of Cliff, the Black employee of The Rendezvous.

Episode 2 - Packing (1943)

  • - Packing for war

Episode 3 - Grind (1967)

  • - Auto grind

Episode 4 - Domestic (1922, 1943, 1967)

Strife (1922)

At home, Cliff's wife, Rose, incessantly challenges his manhood for failing to better stand up to the racists and get a pay raise.

"Why did I even tell you?..." Tensions rise.

She clips him with a cast iron pan and his response begins by smashing her head that creates a large hole in the kitchen wall as their children witness in horror.

Ruby, the girl and Clay, the boy...

Dishes (1943)

Clay, the man...

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Clay, the man...

Won't (1967)

Clay, the old man...

  • -

Episode 5 - Wire (1922)

Touring musician Fats Waller is tickling the ivories at The Rendezvous as patrons drink.

Some fellas are setting up an important meeting that will soon take place at The Rendezvous.

"So I says to him, I says, 'Handy to be so near the river's current that'll sweep away your trash.' You see?" 


- until the boys come down from the upstairs lookout to announce the arrival of police.
  • - Alarm Wire light


Episode 6 - Tensions (1943)

  • - Having a riot

Episode 7 - Discontent (1967)

  • - Seeds of discontent

Episode 8 - Roadhouses (1922, 1943, 1967)

Ain't misbehavin' (1922)

Everyone pitches in to clean up after the entire bar rotates to hide in the wall.

Fats starts adlibbing what would become one of his famous tunes, as the police enter asking questions but are only rewarded with fries, like the boys, plus a subtle bribe.

Patriarch ache (1943)

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Supremes (1967)

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Episode 9 - Family tree

Optional 1800s bonus episode.
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Episode 10 - Tanks in Detroit (1967)

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Episode 11 - Father's funeral (1943)

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Episode 12 - Gangsters rendezvous (1922)

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Episode 13 - Wealth of generations (1922, 1943, 1967)

Quietly healing (1922)

Through the blizzard Cliff trudges home alone, in the dark.

Cliff finishes patching up the wall, he quietly tidies the kitchen, and puts his tools away.

Cliff slips into bed, Rose rolls over, and they embrace in silence.

Sins are forgiven.

Real riches (1943)

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Diamonds! (1967)

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Reference

Wikipedia links, unless otherwise noted:

1922

  • Ain't Misbehavin' (song)
    "Ain't Misbehavin'" is a 1929 stride jazz/early swing song. Andy Razaf wrote the lyrics to a score by Thomas "Fats" Waller and Harry Brooks for the Broadway musical comedy play Connie's Hot Chocolates (opened June 20, 1929). As a work from 1929 with its copyright renewed, it will enter the American public domain on January 1, 2025.
  • Boardwalk Empire, an HBO television series, 2010-2014

1943

  • 1943 Detroit race riot, Sunday June 20 - Tuesday June 22, 1943
    • Belle Isle Park
    • MacArthur Bridge (Detroit), 1923+, replaced an iron bridge with wooden decking that accidentally caught fire and was destroyed in 1915. The bridge, popularly known as the Belle Isle Bridge, was originally named the George Washington Bridge and renamed the Douglas MacArthur Bridge after General Douglas MacArthur in 1942.

1967

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